Детектив Некро / Detective Necro [v.0.55 Hotfix] (2022) (Rus/Eng) [Ren'Py] [Linux] [BlackHandGames] [Abandoned]

Story background (Character stuff will follow, and all the main story details. I'll try to tell this shit in chronological order, but that ain't easy) : MC is the descendant of Vali, a fake name taken from the norse god of vengeance. Vali's real name is Kazamir, the evil one hinted at throught the story. He was betrayed by the Emperor at the time because had stumbled on the fact that the Emperor had gotten his own mother pregnant. In a bid to silence him, Kazzy boy was assassinated (hehe ass ass) or so they thought. They had stabbed him and thrown him out the window of a castle, Bohemian style. Kaz had up until this point, been quite the loyal yes man to the royal family, so this stung quite a bit. He had served them faithfully, only asking for materials to try to save the love of his life from dying (more on that later). Kaz just so happened to be found by Natasha, who knew who he was and saw his potential. She dragged him back to her mother who worked a dangerous blood ritual to make sure he survived, but he had to heal the old fashioned way, with time. This allowed him to grow close to bother Nat and her mother, but not to Grace, not yet.


So, as he gets closer to the vamps, they introduce him to the very old texts that they've been keeping around for a rainy day. You know, the forbidden stuff they don't teach you at sunday school. Kaz grows his powers (and ego). The vamps are happy to let him grind his axe, and even provide him support for the idea of a rebellion. At this point though, he's just hanging out in a spooky shit house with some emo girls, so he isn't getting much done.


Time goes on, blah blah, no one wants to hear this. He's rebelling and he has a tiny army. They're just raiders for the moment, not much of a threat. Kaz has fully dawned the persona of Vali, not wanting anyone to know he was the boy who lived (you're a wizard Vali). He meets dragons, fucks dragons, has some babies with dragons. Boom, MC's bloodline is in the world. (Archmage Minthara, his other ho, being your grandma was meant to be a red herring.) He begins raising big armies of the undead, even raising up soldiers from every battle. Yet he makes a classic mistake. He overextends hiimself, makes too many promises he can't keep, then he realizes he's trapped. He throws a hail mary, die now to live later. Thus the beginning of the game. (This was all gonna be told in flashback snippets, just enough to fill you in. Ain't no one trying to read something as long as LOTR for porn).



Now, onto the gooder stuff I guess. MC's shit ass.


You already know his basic outline story, but the hidden details is that MC's has always been quite the powerful mage. The government has been hunting his bloodlne for quite some time. They found his pops when he was like 8. So they killed the whole family, except MC who lives through a massive burst of necrotic energy that turns everyone into dust like that one shooter game than Raven software made.


Yes, parallel between him and Vali. Storytelling and shit.


So, MC escapes, winds up with Glasha's dad, who actually knows a hell of a lot more than I let you know. He knows exactly who you are, he knew your Dad, but he also knows he's gotta keep you hidden. He takes you to Ophelia's mom, who mindwipes your ass.


You forgot everything, and lived like a regular ass amnesiac kid


So, onto present day - I dunno how to format this. So I'm going to give a basic outline of the main plot, and focus mostly on how each girls story would have gone.


So, Nat and Grace obviously know exactly who you are, but they're under strict orders from Mommy dearest not to tell you, like they swore unbreakable blood oaths and they literally can't tell you, even if they wanted to. Glasha has no idea about any of this, neither does Phoebe. So, you were supposed to plod along the main story, and find out that you'd been found again, not only by the government, but by some weirdo's who literally worship Vali's daughter (MC's howevermany times great grandma). She was a half dragon who was skilled in necromancy, and made a cult of personality that slowly made her into a suppossed goddess. They do sacrifices to her, hence the whole murder story tying into you.


⁠game-previews⁠ This is his daughter btw , in case you wanna know what she looked like.


Anyway, you would have had multiple factions to side with, not only to solve what's going on, but it also would have functioned as a way to see which ending you got. Even within the harem ending, you would have had a main girl at the top of the pyramid.


I had a cool ending scene planned where after you kill or spare the main baddy, you would have had a beaten and broken MC go outside and smoke his first ciggie in years. What could have been


Anyway - the girls follow on at a time


Glasha - All in all pretty wholesome. She would have been there for you, your ultimate cuckquean. She would have been the main driver of most threesome scenes. I didn't have a lot of lesbian stuff planned, but there was some, esecially with kimmy. Her story would have revolved around her dead beat mother who was helping the bad guys recruit girls. Her mom wasn't fully aware of what she was doing, but she defo knew it was nothing good. Glasha would have only been able to die at the very end if you massively fucked up. Like a heart wrenching, quick death. If you chose her, you basically know what you're getting. A green girl who loves sharing you. Not big twists or turns here, she is loyal start to finish. (edited)


Phoebe - She's a sneaky little girl who is kind of lying, but also not. The reasons she left you are true, but it wasn't the only reason. The coldest truth was, she was infertile. Unable to give you a baby while Glasha could, she felt absolutely redudant and unable to claim any scrap of self respect or dignity. Her verbally abusive mother had essentially ruined her life by telling her she wasn't any good. It would have been a pretty sad, but ultimately fulfilling trip with her. You would also have been able to bang her mother in some rough sex while Phoebe berated her. Not rape, but like, an uppity bitch getting put in her place (and she likes it). Phoebe would have been loyal all the way through. She would have helped you gather spell tomes and books, also she would have helped you repair the main grimoire, which would have been far better than the vamp version. She could die halfway through the game if you weren't careful with the vamps.


Kimmy - A real sweetheart. She didn't really have any secrets, she is who she is. She wants to improve the lot of gobbos and prove to others that they can be good, she wants to lead by example. However, Kimmy had a trust meter. If she didn't trust you, she may have ghosted you when the going got tough. If you romanced her without trust, you would directly lead to her death when she tries to run and you told her not to. Her solo ending would have been a wholesome romance, but I liked it much better in the harem with her and Glasha together for you. She and Glasha would have had a...sismance? Like a bromance for girls? Friends with benefits but in love with the same dude. I dunno what you'd call it.


Lily - Whew lad. I have so much to say about this one. She was quite clearly my second favorite girl behind Glasha. She would have been so much fun for anyone who loves dominating or being dominated. She would have had a lot of hidden triggers making her go one way or another. So, when the game starts, she doesn't love or like you. She's sugar sweet, but only because you catch more flies with honey. At the point in the game we reached, she's using you. She doesn't love you, but she does find you interesting. She sees the potential in your blood, and she knows exactly who Vali is. She's just playing dumb. She basically wants you and your power to help her topple her pops and seat her on one of the thrones of hell. She would have made you a king in return. She could die in a few different ways, but not really because demons don't really die. They just need time to reform. Her romance would have been either maledom or mommydommy. On either path, she could eventually grow to love you, something she would struggle massively with internally. Her loyalty would waver in the face of potential gain, but you could keep her loyalty easily. She'd basically send you an endless supply of cubi to play with. If you got her love, she'd dote on you for real. Romancing her would actually make it way easier to get the good ending, even if you didn't fully side with her.


Faiza - She suspects more than she lets on, but she thinks she's losing it at the current point. She would have played a big role in helping solve the case and with Jose. If you chose to make her watch Jose, he would be saved. If not, he was going to become a vamp's thrall by digging around too much. She'd basically be by your side the whole time, yet another ride or die. Her cousin and her mom would also have played a big role in helping you decipher some of those tomes you'd find throught the game. I had wavered and made it so that you could have all 3, but alas. Anyway, her endings would all be good and would mostly revolve around you getting up to kinky antics with her. She's kinda a freak for you, you already saw that though. I had an idea for her death scene, but in the end, I decided she could only die one way, and it's only on the worst ending.


Nat - Nat's a tough one to explain in a few words. She might seem like she loves Vali, but she actually hates him. She's playing her cards close to her chest. Toward the end, Vali had massively betrayed her by siding with Siv (dragon lady) and casting her aside. You can already see that in the game a bit, but it got worse. She fakes her happiness, even around Grace. She's kind of snotty with you because you look exactly like Vali and she has no high hopes for you. Where we are in the game, she was at the very, very cusp of seeing that you weren't your ancestor, so she was willing to give you a chance. She genuinely loves Grace as her sister, and if you got her loyalty, she would have even betrayed her mother for you. (Her mother is evil AF, ngl. Like psycho homelander levels.)


Grace - Fucking hell, man. She is a cupcake with a tragic backstory. When Nat's mother turned her, she locked her in a room with her entire family and waited for Grace to get hungry. Eventually, her beast came out and she ate them. Even centuries later, she feels so much self loathing and self hate. She's wholesome, but also a suicidal emo girl who can't die and has to live forever. Grace was like a little sister to Vali, so she has no problems trusting you. Her storyline would have been finding her self worth again by helping you on your quest. I built this one for white knights. (edited)


Vasaer -A tricky girl. She is sweet, but she could be one of the one's who was corruptible by a darker MC. I had lots of fun planning her out. She is intricately tied into MC's backstory because her parents knew yours. She would have discovered her own magic and been a big supporter for you. There's a lot more, but I think it's too complicated to explain.


Elowin - What she is on the box. A one night stand that you got pregnant. Her hubby hates humans, and when he found out she was having MC's baby, he began abusing her and made her miscarriage. You would have been able to kill him, quickly or bloody. You could arrest him too if you're boring. She would have been your man on thhe inside with the government. She would be the reason you could always slip through their fingers.


Anya - The dead girl. Poor thing was getting manipulated by the thing that captured her. That thing just so happened to be Minthara fucking with you too. Why? Cause Vali betrayed her and locked her ass away in her little pocket dimension. When you accidentally banished her, you threw her into the wolves den., You were about to get her back. Vali would have shown you how to put her soul into the body of a woman who was completely brain dead. Then you would have been the only one to see her as Anya. You could also raise her body up for a funny ass scene I had planned. The main goal here was getting her free of Minthara. She would have helped you a fuck ton. Can't die because she's already dead.


Rosa - She's a photographer and she would have helped you by falling into doing spirit photography. Kind of integral to the future plotlines with Anya. Even though she wasn't main cast, she could have been knocked up. You could also accidentally killl her ex boyfriend in a fit of rage, so there's that.


Maz - Fully reliant on having romanced Lily. She was the werewolf, bound by infernal magic to serve Lily. You could have freed her from servitude or made it worse. If you romanced Lily and not Maz, you controlled her fate. Could be somewhat wholesome. Had moodswings cause of the moon, which would have been clear later.


Xiao - would have massively simped for you and convinced her mom to work with you. Very useful but not an absolute necessity. She would have been a firecracker in bed though.


Ivette and Zuzanna - Sisters, big boobies. Both very sweet. Zuzanna talked a big game, but was a total virgin. Ivette was always running around behind her sister cleaning up her messes. Zuzanna is actually quite a powerful mage. If you had them in the final battle, it would have been a guarantee that Vasaer would live.


Yasmina - a descendant of Vali's right hand man. Not a very powerful mage, but she would have been massively pressured by her brother to make a baby with you. She would struggle with understanding if she really wanted you, or if she wanted you because he brother told her to. Her brother was quite evil, and wanted to bring Vali back at your expense by ensuring he took over your body


Liz - She was the caretaker of Vali's stuff. She was put into the game because I have a massive fetish for muscle girls. Sue me.


Yui - Same but for monster girls. She was there to add more fun to Kimmy's story. She was actually one of a twin, but they were pulling a christian bale in prestige.


Namaah - A tricky bitch who was working for Lily's pops behind the scenes. If you romance her, she wouldn't betray you. Otherwise, she would.


Adam/Eve - Initially planned for Adam to die and stay dead, but fucking Cercil talked me into making Adam into a girl named Eve. Then I realized how hot it'd be if Adam's sister simping was from a girl.


Hope- Had a big plotline where she'd hunt down her brother's killers, but then I made it so that they'd do it together. Also, sister threesomes. Hot.



Lorna and Theresa - Could have been saved from captivity, but were mostly there to show what's going on behind the scenes. Would have had a badass scene with Theresa going on a rampage with a shotgun against her captors.


Siv - Yeah, you could have fucked your own ancestor . She was evil though, had a massive plot to play. If you chose to romance her rather than reseal her, she would basically become an uncontrollable force of nature.



Ophelia / Qadira - Those kind of becames Cercil's babies. I'll let him handle those.


Sammy - Only romanceable if Jose became a thrall, otherwise she would have stayed true. Some massive fuckery happened behind the scenes that I was going to let you know. So, basically Jose had taken MC in as a witness against his old crime boss, letting him stay in exchange for helping take him down. MC and Sammy got really, really close. One night, things between MC and her exploded. They hooked up that once, but never again. Sam swore it'd never be something she repeated, she viewed it as a mistake because she loved her hubby. She got pregnant, but she refuses to believe, even internally, that Maya is MC's baby. She always felt a connection with him afterward, but buries it deep under layers of denail. Jose's neglect makes it hard. Her romance story would have been her coming to terms with the true father of Maya, and her obvious love and connection with MC. Otherwise, she would have remained a friend and the knowledge of Maya's parentage never comes to light.


The dude MC murdered was that same boss. He ruined the case, but Jose felt he did the right thing because he tried to force Glasha into sex. She didn't do it, just to be clear.


I can't think of anything else, my brain hurts. Ask questions if you got them, I'll answer them tonight and in the next few days.


Well, now you know it all. At least, I think. ‍


I figured some people would figure it out early, but I didn't want to change the story. Otherwise you get your story all fucked up.


Only the epilogues. Basically telling everything that would have happend. Showing the kids MC has with the various girls, growing older, that sort of thing. The story would have ended without any loose threads.


No sequels.


I was going to move on from this to a lovecraftian horror story, but that ain't happening

I see some speculation about things, so I'll clear it up as best as I can. This will be my last post on this site as I've already abandoned my discord.

I've had issues with this guy from nearly the beginning of development. He initially wanted me to add NTR (specifically netorare) content for Glasha, I said no. I have no interest in creating that content, and it wouldn't make any sense for her character at all. He got pissy about it. He later came back and sent me some DM's about how I should just do what he wants since I'm already "ripping off Talothral". Keep in mind, this is like 2 years ago or something after 0.2 release.

Since then, he occasionally came back to DM me some random complaint or bullshit. I viewed him as annoying but harmless. I eventually ended up banning him from the first discord because he kept spam asking for NTR content. When I created the second one, I didn't even think to ban him because I hadn't had any interaction with him for months.

The other day, I was talking to someone in discord, and I meant to post a picture of the amount that a pc repair place wanted to fix my graphics card here in Japan. I accidentally chose the wrong photo and posted a selfie that my wife sent me of herself and the kids. I don't think it was up that long, but however long it was, it was enough. I guess he saw his time to shine, and he used that one photo to track down a ton of my personal shit. Social media profiles, old photos, photos of my kids, my old work on twine games, my parents and sister's address. It was a lot of stuff.

Anyway, I don't know much about the guy other than he is a member of Talothral's server. I doubt he has any connection at all to Talothral, other than joining his server. For all I know, he might be harassing him too. I don't know as I don't remember ever having any interaction with Talothral. I also really can't understand how or why he's held onto this grudge for so long. It's way beyond petty, it's psychotic. He hasn't threatened me or my family physically, only to expose us and report this all to my wife's job, which could very well lead to her getting fired.

Either way, this ruined things for me. It's sucked all the fun out of things, especially because I've tried to be kind to everyone I interacted with. Making some fun porn isn't worth the harrassement. Sorry I couldn't finish the game. I doubt I'll hang around the VN space anymore, much less develop something. You can consider this officially abandoned. Once again, I appreciate all your guys who I had positive interactions with, but I can't risk my family's livelihood and wellbeing for a hobby.

Anyway, you guys take care.